Authors, Poets and Playwrights
Thursday, January 6, 2011
A Traffic Haiku - by Elliot Shakespeare
A boy sees a girl
across a river of cars.
She looks back at him.
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bmsgrade4c
January 7, 2011 at 3:52 AM
super metaphor Elliot Mr.S.
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bmsgrade4c
January 8, 2011 at 3:51 AM
I like your metaphor.
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super metaphor Elliot Mr.S.
ReplyDeleteI like your metaphor.
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